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Rudimentary Wheel by ~dzee:icondzee:



D’ya know that tremble? No?
The one that pushes ya to the edge
Of a seat, and makes you shift
Your hands to make sure solids
Are still solid? It’s not cold.

D’ya hear those words? No?
Those ones that transcend the page
They are written on and lift
The corners of your mouth
To a grin? It’s no joke.

D’ya feel that tingle? No?
wet sponge inside your head.
Sparkign waves crashing, rift
Your body into two feeling.
That are good? It’s no shock.

Do you feel that realization
That all things you have once
Done were done so bad
And you were shit but now
You know? It’s not bad!
©2005-2008 ~dzee
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~grasshopa:icongrasshopa: Jul 18, 2005, 2:51:42 AM
It's really good but you lost me at the last verse

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~dzee:icondzee: Jul 18, 2005, 4:54:19 AM
That was the idea. It's the part of the poem where you either get it or you don't.

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~grasshopa:icongrasshopa: Jul 18, 2005, 5:35:07 AM
Oh... well I don't get it

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~dzee:icondzee: Jul 18, 2005, 10:37:56 AM
It has references to taoistic beliefs influencing my path in life. It's quite personal.
It's sort of finding a mental state of balance and understanding.

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~grasshopa:icongrasshopa: Jul 18, 2005, 3:26:40 PM
Interesting, where do I find out about this Taoism stuff...

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~dzee:icondzee: Jul 19, 2005, 5:29:22 AM
Try searching google and the Galway library.

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~grasshopa:icongrasshopa: Jul 19, 2005, 7:45:47 AM
Knew you'd say that:P Thanks

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~dzee:icondzee: Jul 19, 2005, 11:20:37 AM
It's andy that gave me all my information, a lot of it was picked up over the years through life.
It's one of those self-discovered epiphany type things.

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~grasshopa:icongrasshopa: Jul 19, 2005, 1:37:41 PM
Yeah I heard that infamous story about andy and his infamous painless broken arm...

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